離燕辭 · Farewell Cry of the Parting Swallow
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離燕辭 · Farewell Cry of the Parting Swallow
An original 古風 song for day three — a woman at a summer-dawn river dock watches her beloved's boat dissolve into morning haze, a red thread trailing from her fingers into the current. Erhu lead, pipa ornament, pentatonic minor; classical literary Chinese lyrics in five-character verse.
An original 古風 song — Day 3 · Theme: Love & Separation
A summer dawn on the river. Her hands weave a red thread that goes nowhere now — his boat has already slipped into the morning haze. The erhu holds the note she cannot speak; the pipa drops a single pluck like a stone into still water.
This is not the moon, not the letter, not the bamboo rustling outside a window. This is the dock. The rope is cast off. The water takes the thread.
歌詞 · Lyrics
引子
（二胡獨奏，水流聲）
主歌一
曉風搖渡頭，紅線縈素手，
舟影入煙渚，一去幾時收。
蓮葉翻露重，螢聲尚未窅，
凝睫送帆遠，碧波自東流。
副歌
離燕辭秋渚，欲留留不住，
紅線漸飄散，愁絲萬縷苦。
相思寄遠水，雁書迺無路，
此情如岸草，年年向江吐。
主歌二
梳鬢臨鏡空，機杼惆無聲，
素縑半裁罷，針線冷無情。
旌動西風早，斜陽照孤城，
倚閣問歸雁：何日共晨晴？
副歌
離燕辭秋渚，欲留留不住，
紅線漸飄散，愁絲萬縷苦。
相思寄遠水，雁書迺無路，
此情如岸草，年年向江吐。
尾聲
雲散江天晚，孤影對斜曛，
紅線沉碧水，此意無人知。
創作說明 · Notes
Theme: Love & separation — the moment after parting, when absence becomes a physical object: the loose end of a red thread floating downstream.
Structure: 引子 (erhu intro) → 主歌一 (verse 1, dawn dock) → 副歌 (chorus, swelling ache) → 主歌二 (verse 2, interior — loom, mirror) → 副歌 → 尾聲 (coda, dusk, red thread sinking)
Instrumentation: Erhu lead (weeping sustained line), pipa ornamental plucks, dizi breath undertone, soft frame drum at ~68 bpm, pentatonic minor
Emotional arc: Quiet dawn sorrow → swelling ache of watching a boat recede → interior stillness (loom, needle) → resigned release
Imagery used (new): summer dawn, river dock, red thread, loom, needle and silk, distant sail, lotus leaves damp with dew, cicada hush, slant sunlight on an empty city wall, dusk clouds parting
Imagery deliberately avoided this cycle: cold river, autumn leaves, wild geese (non-repeated), moon-over-water, spring courtyard, candle, letter, bamboo shadow, begonia, plum blossom
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